I really appreciated the story and presentation. Both felt really unique to me. having the words change as you clicked on them had a lot of great effect I thought and made the world seem eerie. When interacting with the Pig-Man, I appreciated the various story elements you got trying out different scenarios, but got frustrated having to restart from the beginning of the demo. You but a lot of effort into each branch but it quickly took away from the exploration element to have to restart. I know in certain scenarios it gives you an opportunity to retry, but I would have appreciated restarting from meeting the Pig-Man in any scenario you ended up with, not just the one.
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Hello!
I'll definitely see to adding more checkpoints. Though I might also have to consider the 'nonlinear' part. Some choice options can change depending on other choices you've made. I'll see how to integrate all this. For now, as I've mentioned in my game description, I strongly recommend players to save the game from time to time.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! It's always helpful to know what players think!
Good luck for the jam!