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Hehe, you're welcome! :)

Oh, and sorry again for mistakes and weird sentences ! ^^'

Spoilers (again, i guess x))

Well, she did it well! Leah like so much like a real human being! :)

Ohhhh, thank you for the link! I save this series in my loooooong list of... series haha. Sound so great! <3 Thank you for the discovery ! It will help my with my writing, i like scenario like this ^^ And it's for that i like your VN :)

Yes! I can't imagine to see a friend (?) going though so much and end up like this ! I imagine myself feel like a failure to not be able to save him/her in time! :/

Wow! And she like this for a year? Damn. Doyle feel like so much a hunter with his prey :O And... if he loved her all that time, he must have felt so lonely and reinforced his Yandere-attitude in plus ! :o To see her, doing that with the air and all, like he said in the VN! And if i'm remind well he know Aku no? Not knowing, knowing him but see him alive and all, no? :o

I see, good thinking of your part! And it wasn't boring at all! On the contrary haha ! :D I like differents POV of characters! You see thing of a new light! Of new dark light for Doyle ! (I'm the queen of humor uwu)

Yep. You can write fuck up characters and explore you can't doing in reality cos' it's forbidden for good reasons haha !

And i see that for yandere characters, haha! And i like who you write them !

Yes, totally! The voice acting doing makes it all anxiety-provoking! In "good way". Like, if he jump in my screen, i will not being surprised at all! haha

I said yes cos' i'm was panicking XD ! Ohhh, i was guess right! I like possessive-type character haha! Honeslty i'm can undersand for not subtitles, it's fit for the ??? part of wtf and breaking fourth wall ! :D

Oh, i have understood well ? Ah, good for my not good hearing haha

Buuuut, if you can send me what he saying, i'm will being grateful! But, your sure? i'm not want to put another charge of work on you ! :o

And, i'm not familiar with itch so... who you can email me? :o I'm such a old grannie sommetimes with technology ;_;

Hm, i see! And he not a monogamous character haha

More seriously, it is a single entity or multiple ? Like plenty of

alternative him for all players ?

Awww, he love me! And he want me to suffer... :D help

More your write about him, the more i'm curious! :p He his already such a interesting character! I like character like him, haaaa ! <3

I'm want to know why he so obessed with us! Like who he know us? Who he know how to breaking the fourth wall? does he still have a physical form or has he lost it and is wandering in the webcam? (horrible fate if it is the case o_o) He is in my webcam ? XD And i'm happy you you confirm he a yandere ^^ yes and h.e.l.p haha

And be careful with him ! x)

YES! Ahhhh, i'm want to see your new projects, your new characters and him, haaaa *_* And i'm wish you good luck with all that ! Break a leg!

Oh! A remake? If you do, i'm will take it! Oh and for the sprites and all (i'm talk about Solip), i was a little reluctant at first and I'm VERY picky about drawing while my proper draws are... um.... <_< buuut honestly I thought with the quality of writing it would pass! And I was right! And afterwards the sprites made me nostalgic of old manga so it's was ok! And i liked the sprite of Shiro :3 And... new routes ? +_+ Yes!

Ohhh ~ You said to me such interesting things here +___+ ! I will pay for DD and Impostor one day, maybe i wait for a new games or uptades for taking them in pack ! :D

And, you're welcome! :DDD I was taken away with passion for writing this review so i'm was pretty impressed of me lol And thanks! i'm happy i'm not being too weird or weird at all, i'm glad haha And i'm happy your happy with my feedback haha XD

And you too! Have a wonderful weekend ! ;D

Melancholy Marionette2 years ago

You don't need to apologise :3

Alrighty, spoiler time it is, haha.

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Yeah, I think the whole cast did a fantastic job of bringing all the characters to life :3

It's probably one of my favourite series! I would like to make some games inspired by some of the other episodes at some point too. With each episode being completely different, there are so many cool ideas in there :3

You're right there, it was exactly like Doyle was a hunter just stalking his prey all that time x3 But yeah, he would have been able to see Aku back when he was alive, waaaay before Leah even noticed Doyle existed. So he was watching them as a couple and was jealous of Aku. I think I only very briefly referenced it rather than went into detail, but Doyle would have noticed one day that Aku was gone, and he would have seen in the local newspapers what happened since Aku was an actor. They probably would've covered the story of the tragic accident. Instead of being sad, Doyle would have just thought that maybe he finally had a chance with Leah >.<

I'm glad you thought the PoV stuff worked well :3

It's no trouble for me to send what the guy is saying in that scene in A9 because I still have the script that I sent to my friend who played the character :3 So I can just take the dialogue out of that to send to you. Don't worry, I'm not great either when it comes to figuring stuff like that out x3 I'll just leave my email here, and you can just send me a blank message to that address or something so that I have your email address to send the dialogue to. So mine is: melancholicmarionette@gmail.com

I might be able to find the old scripts for what he says in SR too, but I'm not 100% sure where the files are because my SR stuff is all over the place >.< haha.

Yeah, in a way, you're right with what you said in that he's technically just one being, but because he's digital, he can make as many copies of himself as he needs, so that there is one version of him for every single player :3 So when he's talking, he's talking specifically to you rather than all the players at once. To be honest though, even I don't know everything about him yet because I still have a lot to figure out x3 All I know is that I want to tell his story over time. But yeah, being stuck in a webcam would be a really horrific fate >.<

Thank you for the luck :3 I will certainly need it x3

Yeah, the sprites are one of the things that bother me the most about SR. Since I needed so many with all the world-hopping going on, there was only one set of sprite generators that I own that was going to work, and even then, it wasn't enough because I had to use a different set from a different artist for all the friend characters. So it bothers me that Mc and Kuro are in one art style, and then all the other characters are in a different style >.< And it also bothers me that most of the Kuro sprites are made from female sprite generators just because there aren't enough resources around for male sprites, haha. I'm glad you decided to check the game out regardless :3 Cos I think the sprites probably put a lot of people off from even trying it >.<

Hopefully, I will have a new free game out at the end of September for Spooktober VN jam if I can manage it :3 And I should, hopefully, be able to get another update out or two for DD by the end of the year!

Your passion definitely shows :3 I'm so glad you decided to take the time to type everything up and share your thoughts! And you just seem awesome to me :D Weird is great too anyhow, haha. I'm definitely a weirdo x3

I hope you have a super week ahead :3

Tialuse2 years ago(+1)

This entire review of review of review of review it's just spoilers!

So... Spoilers :D

Oh...! Seriously ? I'm hyped haha *_*

Okayyy! Damn, i imagine Doyle staring into space all the time. And i know Doyle said that no one but Leah had noticed him, but Aku is blind to ever having noticed Doyle stare at his apartment window. I mean, i guess i have noticied some dude who was looking at the window where my girlfriend was working, but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

And yeah, with the thoughts that can have Doyle i undersand he like: yeah, drama queen asshole just die, it's my chance ! :D And thank you for clarifying for me ! :)

I'm see, i'm see! :) One of your friend played it? :O It's great to have someone who you can work with in your job that you know! Thank you for that! You're very nice ! :D Don't worry if you can't to find the script SR ! Offering to send it to me is already really sweet :)! And we can creating a club for not techno advancing gramma haha x)

Oh, great! I had understood well! It's a great capacity and not totally horrifying when you know about his personnality haha <_< He can't get killed if we destroy the one we speak to us individually, because he can create many him as he please humm 🤔

Buuuut, it's great we can have a one for yourself <3

It's great this detail, that he speak to only me! Good thinking ^^! And they all the same personnality? :o

Again, good luck for creating his story and beware of him! x)

Yeah, totally, just imagine this, being stuck and all... We can undersand your mind slipt. Like him... hahaha <_<

You're welcome, haha ! ~

I can undersand this can bit frustrating ! :/ But, it's work for me in the end anyway ! :) And, yeah, i guess if i'm not be playing A9 and all, and not to have been intrigued by the mystery guy and to have liked the writing, I wouldn't have tried the game to be honest. (Sorry if it's brutal way of saying that ><) But, lucky me i'm a glad i played A9 and discorverying your universe! I will thinking a little more before judging a work of art by details that put me off now :D!

Ohhh *_* You interest me haha :D I will definitely give it a try if it comes out or I'll wait for DD updates ^^ ! :D And try to not to faint because of the work ! :( Be careful!

Haha, thank you :D ! And... awww my heart! Thank you so much for your kinds work, i'm touched <3 :) ! My heart is swollen with emotions haha ;w; ! You're adorable! And like i said in one on my review, you're seen a good person a well ! :D Haha, weirdo assemble!

Thank's ! You too (again haha XD) ! And i'm sorry (again, as well) if i can a little weird with my way of saying things cos' i have a blood test tomorrow and i HATE stings and i'm a scaredy-cat so ;__; ! So this is why if my sentences are more bizarre and all cos i'm stressed, like really stressed and I can't manage to to write in english or think haha <_<

Oh, and i'm hope it's okay i'm have responding here, because i don't know whether I should write all this in the email or not ^^' !

Anddd, that's all! In my way of sleeping ! (Who i'm am kidding, hahahaha <_<)

Melancholy Marionette2 years ago

Just letting you know that I've read all of your message, but I'll be heading to bed soon so I'll reply to everything here in an email sometime tomorrow instead :3

Just wanted to wish you good luck with your blood test! I have to have them quite frequently so I'm used to them, thankfully. Just remember that it'll only take a second, and then you should make sure to treat yourself to something nice afterwards :D That's what I do whenever I have to go do something I really don't wanna do and it makes me stressed. I usually get an extra tasty coffee or something afterwards so I have something to look forward to, haha. I hope it goes well for you anyhow :3

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