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I just finished a playthrough (I consistently choose Alexander, my best boy, through it)! It is really great! Everything is NEAT, the visuals are stunning. I have praised the character sprites many times. The background CGs look superb. I think I spent a minute or two admiring your UI, from the main page to the settings page, I clicked on it one by one lol XD Even if I had to use Simple font because the default is a little hard to read ^^"

The OST sounds super good too! I think it really contributes a lot to the atmosphere. But I can't say anything about the composition of course XD I notice in Alexander's route, one OST (I called it D Minor Arpeggio OST lol... I think it is D Minor...) is repeated a lot when I click to proceed with the story. I think it is a programming problem? It is continued until the scene fades into the "Policies, Petitions, and Diplomacy" page. I can hear the OST repeated twice or thrice on this page too.

The writing is detailed. I love the narration, even though the quotation marks (the « ... ») take a little while for me to be used to it. I read slowly at my own pace and I've never been bored even for a second. Unfortunately, I can't say more about the story or characters when playing a demo because it is still only a part of the story, even more so if the game has stats feature. For me, stats feature has the downside that it is harder for me to be immersed. So I think for the story review, I will wait until we have more material for me to be able to process it in my head (maybe the final version). But agreeing with user @VersaceHostile below, the MC is truly a freaking bad bitch XD XD XD

By the way, does Lydia not have any ladies-in-waiting or maidservants? Is it not the custom? I want to ask one more thing, but I can't for the life of me remember it :D Maybe I will ask you on tumblr when I remember.

P.S.

Ayael, I found a few misspells, do you want me to tell you? Maybe here or Discord or emails? I took a photo of them lol But I plan to play only one time and I don't like to overplay a demo, so the misspells may be not all. I don't know if you have fixed these tho, sorry if this is redundant.

Edit:

Master of Murmurs, can I invite you to "murmur" about ourselves in the corner of the royal garden, far from sights? Thank you in advance.

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Thanks for the detailed review, to answer a couple of the point here:

- There thing to be a few problem with the music indeed, we will try to patch this before the next build 

- If you dislike the stats feature, I strongly encourage you to take only the petitions, if you are in story mode you can ignore the policie system completely except the one required time for the tutorial. For me, petitions are 100% into the story, your story as Empress and which kind of Empress you want to be. 

- The MC does have maids and ladies-in-waiting, they are just part of the background and mentionned when necessary. One lady-in-waiting does have a sprite in the full game tho ~

- You can send me the typos in discord yes

- Who knows what the Master of Murmurs might do, if the game has a lot of succes........................

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Noooooo, I actually love stats feature D: I love being confused and making things harder for myself. It is harder to be immersed yes, but I want to at least go through it one or two times D: ...And, oh, I guess the petitions are part of the story. That slips from me.

Okay, which server I have to send the typos to? Feedback?

And... MASTER OF MURMURS DLC IF THINGS ARE GOING WELL AAAAAAAYYYY

Oh I completely missunderstand your first post sorry ahah, and yes feedback is good!