I DID have fun! You made a great Bitsy RPG!
Some light bugs i found (spoilers alert):
•Retrying after Death Town leads to fight against troll again. Unfair!
•After defeating the fog, edmund comment appears without "EDMUND:" mentionned.
•I know you gave up in the end... But going to Rignis leads to the left on the map, and to the "right" in reality, through fog and beyond (no turning in fact, just going upon instead of turning)...Maybe it was easier for you to make fight screens this way?
Wish this could help :)