It was a pretty interesting story! I loved that as you went around the room the story changed. I would say the only thing that really needs a change is maybe after everything has been read the arrows should just show up. I was pretty confused at first but knew there had to be more than 3 minutes of content and went to watch someone elses playthrough to find out how to continue. Hope you enjoy the video!
Thanks so much Cyberwolf and glad you enjoyed the story! I appreciate your feedback a ton and agree that implementing something like a "hint" that you can click on the right to advance might be good to add. That navigation expectation is a hold-over from an older platform that this was more obvious/immediate. Thanks again for playing and glad you enjoyed the ending :)
I wanted to let you know about another upcoming game I have coming out later this year and let you know about how to get early access to the project.
If you liked exploring the story of this past project, I think you'll also really love what I'm working on!
Take a look here and thanks again for taking the time to explore my work and leave me feedback!
Sorry for the late reply, totally thought I replied when I saw this. It looks pretty neat! I'd love to get early access to it!