PROS:
I like the music and the feeling of a crowded, yet lively city. It's probably one of best "Sandy" villages I have seen. It has potential.
CONS:
I was rather confused on what to do. I spent a good amount of time wondering the town talking to NPCs which did not say anything about 90% of the time. Also, I got killed, a lot. That's a big no no in game design, especially when the player starts a new game and all the enemies can one shot you. I recommend, removing all the random battles in town, especially for a first town. I even had a full party and we all got wiped out by one imp. Please adjust the balance. Lastly, even for a demo, some dev notes would help. Tell the player that because it's a demo, you can't do X, Y, or Z. I hope I didn't come off too harsh but even for a demo, I got killed way too fast just by simply walking in town which didn't make for a pleasant experience.