Aah, I'm not the type, but I've enjoyed it so much I'll leave an ACTUAL FEEDBACK.
Incredible.
So anyway...
1. Overall, it looks pretty sweet. And can I say I simply adore the background thing? I was actually pretty surprised at how much it changes in the game, especially your relationship with Paris. And I can't really say which one origin is a vanilla one, because every and each of them seem similarly developed.
2. Hm, I'm rather partial to Reaver!Ash/Paris dynamic - the snark is strong in this one.
3. No typoes, no sir!
4. In the full game I'd like to see full game - nothing more, nothing less.
5. I was slightly confused about dialogue thing? Kinda reminded me of Fallout 4 and it's "sarcastic" dialogue option. Perhaps if I was sure what every icon meant, it would be easier to gauge, but I'm not confident I got that right.