Very cool. My biggest complaint is the non-working save system (though you did say that, in fairness). Also, on my first attempt I got to the secrets play and it just... Stopped? Not sure if that was just it being unfinished?
You probably discovered a dialog branch I forgot to type in, due to the immense pain in the ass it wound up being to manage a game with 100+ dialog choices... But I'll work on that save system
