First off, the artwork is definitely the thing carrying this piece for me. It had some strangeness going on that was oozing mystery, so props there. The use of thick grunge lines and dimmed colors reminded me of Darkest Dungeon, and the Lovecraftian nods are always welcome.
There were some technical glitches around, like monitor ratio weirdness, the blue unity background popping out and stuff like that. Plus, Item duping was a thing. But I am sure that given more time and maybe a firmer technical hand, this can grow into something really facinating.