Hey, good work with the stories. Only had time to give the first two a quick look, but I did find a few mistakes. I'll leave them down below for you to check on your own time:
Dugeon of the accursed sword (pure route)
page 2 "But that's **excatly** when you see it."<-- should be exactly
page 3 In **antecipation**, your tongue plays with your short snout. No use standing around. This is the victor's spoils.<--should be anticipation
page 6 "I warned*,* you, young tapir." <--I think that comma I highlighted is unnecessary-
last page broken image <-- now, this one may be a thing with my own browser, but just in case it isn't, I'm pointing it out.
I'll let you know if I find anything else. This is a good start though, keep it up.