I was really interested in playing the game due to the graphics and artwork and I would like to say that the idea and concept of the game is really good. I also loved the art style of the game. However, I felt that the dialogue was way too long for me and I felt a little bored while reading numerous lines. I felt that the lines could be either made shorter or broken up into different parts where players can make more decisions in between. Or, you can also consider having voiced lines as well. Also, I don't know if there are supposed to be multiple endings to the game but it would be cool if more images were drawn to accommodate to the endings. Lastly, it would be good if a variety of background music was used as it felt kinda repetitive throughout the game.
Thank you for reading my comment and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours.