For a student project it's a solid start. The biggest issue is a lack of ending (not sure if the project was designed to flow into another student's work) and with the 1999 build it's impossible to understand the story as the newpapers are unreadable.
Thanks man! The project was meant to be one level out of many... going into the doorway would put you in the next sector of the mansion, and so on. I watched your video and I appreciate the feedback (especially about the pixelated version being unreadable). I may update that version with clearer textures on the newspapers or lay off the pixelate effect. Cheers!