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Ok! So I managed to get the game up and running uwu here are my thoughts:

I LOVE LOVE the art!! Especially Seren's design. I love her armor--with its gold and blue, I feel those colors go so well together. and the design of the armor is so nice to look at as well <3 It gave me images of grandeur. I like Aerona's ruffles too. The backgrounds are beautiful as well. They set the mood well! I like Ikemma's powder blue garb. I bet it's really shimmery.  Aerona's armor--it looked like oxidized copper with how it's so green. I also love that particular shade of green--very evocative of a watery world.

On the story--

Holy fuck are Seren's fans RABID. I didn't expect their intensity lol I might pick up more on a replay, but I wasn't sure why the villagers were so nuts over Seren. Like I know she saved them from evil (or something) but I didn't feel their craziness was warranted on their part, which is kinda sus. Like something more is going on to make her fans so crazy. 👀 👀 Of all the moments in the demo, this hit me hard and fast, and it really stuck with me!

The story was well written and held my interest very well! I never felt the urge to skip ahead, like I sometimes feel when paragraphs wear out their welcome. I am hooked!

I liked the main cast--I felt bad for Aerona. Poor lady, she felt so happy and it was snatched from her :( All the main cast need therapy tho.

Of the main cast, I'm most curious for Wooly--I wonder what his deal is. I tried to make us friends during the chapter--i feel that his and Seren's history is rocky. I jumped at every opportunity to defend him hehe I loved the fact that he used ASL (or whatever sign language the goatmen use). I am confused tho--is Ikemma romanceable? Or is Wooly? I know that Rhain and Aerona are but I was a bit confused about the third :3

anyways, great job!!! i'm looking forward to whatever u have planned :>

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Thank you so much for the lengthy comment! It feels really rewarding to read all your thoughts about the art and story, and I'm really happy to see that the atmosphere and foreshadowing seem to have been conveyed properly!

Ikemma is romanceable, though his romance will work a bit differently from the others!

Chapter 2 will start to reveal some things about Wooly, Ikemma and the fans so I hope you'll enjoy that too :)