This is my personal pick for winner.
Looks beautiful; controls are tight; interesting story; just the right length; appropriate sound effects.
More than anything else though, it has a distinct 'personality'. The quality of the writing was really high.
For me the narrator was a bit superfluous. I would just remove him. And there were a few bugs. Nothing game breaking, I'm sure you are aware of them already, and for a jam it's expected.