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omg... hi !! i made an account so i could comment !! i found this game because of a moot from twitter; and im so glad that i decided to try and play it~

 

the art, the music, the story and the characters are all !! so !! awesome !!!!! i can tell how much love and hard work you guys poured into creating this amazing game. i just finished playing it, and i would love to suggest a few things, if possible...? ^__^

 

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>> at the near end of the game, when b and c started talking about hisao and their past, there was little to no emotional impact. i hope that a full (? or sufficient? I forgot the word) backstory about their childhood would occur before reaching this point in the game… so we could understand their situation a lot better.

>> when b and n were talking to each other while pushing a’s car, it felt awkward because they were staring at each other the whole conversation HAHAHA I suggest that b maybe rests her forehead on the car on certain points. you could also avert their gazes!

>> I hope you guys tackle a and n’s lives too :0 theyre very interesting characters, and i would like to know more about them.

>> perhaps add an auto play option?

>> i think you should put an indicator on the health, stress, etc bars...? especially if it starts becoming an important aspect of the game. i thought having 0 hunger means b isnt hungry... spoiler alert i made her starve throughout the whole game ASJKFLDJ

>> not really a suggestion, but you should fix the transparent part! *photo below*




HUWAHHH im sorry if I didn’t phrase my words properly T__T im terrible with words… AND IM ALSO SORRY if the suggestions ive mentioned are actually already in the game...

good luck with developing this game!!!!! i know how difficult it is to create one... i applaud your hard work!!!!! *claps*

im gonna wait for the full release of this game ^__^ thank you for reading!!!!! :]

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Wahh thank you so much for the kind comment! And thank you for the critiques on the game, we definitely agree with all of them and we've been quite critical of it ourselves for a while, so we have already changed parts of the story to hopefully add more impact and weight to the story + characters. Also yeah the UI is in quite a rough state in the demo, so we'll do our best to polish it up!