Although I loved the surreal elements of your previous title, there's a lot here that stands as a clear improvement. Writing's good, the art is good, and though the school corridors are largely empty, I didn't really feel lost. 

I feel the story could use a little more mystery to it to make us question Ms. Brown's intentions. It would make the ending more impactful. I also still think you should make your own original narrative rather than pull from a pre-established world, but I appreciate that it's a self-contained story. 

Keep it up!

It was such a nice little game! The dialogues with random students were funny and the story was nice. There was nothing that felt out of place and there were enough hints to not get lost. The corridors were a bit long sometimes but the random students still made it interesting. And it would not have made a lot of sense to make the school smaller. I could tell you focused on a good balance between text and riddles. I think this one is overall better than the last one maybe because there is a bit more story to it, while the other one was more focused on the experience, but I enjoyed both of your Annventure fangames! Keep it up!