A very good start, witty dialogue and interesting characters. If anything this is a good base and I can't wait to see it get built up. The only true gripe I had was the lack of music and expressions, but that can easily be fixed later.
Thank you very much! We unfortunately ran out of time to add expressions and music, but we'll be including those in the future updates! I'm so happy you liked the dialogue and characters! Thank you for commenting!!
