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Hi Danielle, I actually think the backgrounds are great, but for me the characters should stand out more in front of the faded backgrounds, so you might want to consider making them less faded. Hoping this makes more sense:)

Glad you enjoyed the review:)

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Hi Shifful Studios,

I'm glad you think the backgrounds are great.  So, if I'm understanding you right, you think the characters that are smaller should be bigger?  I can definately do that.   My thought with making the characters, who don't have dialogue, smaller was so that you would know who was "saying" it.  Also, I was trying to fit all of the characters associated with that scene, in the scene.  The thing is, though, originally I had it so that only the character "speaking" was on screen and larger.  I'm thinking I should change it back to that.

Edit: Actually, after thinking about it, and looking things up, I'll go and try and make my 2d characters look 3d.

Ok, so, I've made a couple of updates to the demo.   I went and added some depth to the characters,  as well as went and broke the long sections of text into smaller paragraphs.