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Hey there Alexanda, I have finally found the time to make a gameplay review for your game! And I might do more of videos in the future since you are working on the game with no stop! Most of the review is on the video here and it has everything that I captured from your game, but in case you can’t watch the entire video, I will write some notes here that might help you to update your game (this has been recorded before your last update). I do need support though on my journey on YouTube, by you subscribing to channel you will make me more motivated to do more of these gameplay review videos in the future.



  • With my first impressions is that the full screen option does not exist which is hard for me to focus with a small window (you might have already added that option by now, but in case you didn’t, I am sharing that).
  • In the begging of the game when talking to the sister Elsee there is a line of her saying “...allot of work sine Father and Mother died...” which I believe that you wanted to use the word “A lot” in this context rather than “Allot” which is not suitable.
  • From the side of the story I must say it is a well rich story and adventure! You have done great with this important part of the game.
  • Also from a positive review, the music and the sound effects are greatly being used to the game advantage.
  • For the quests, they are not really that clear, in the video you will notice that it took me a long time to know exactly what to do! Also, I think it is better to show the name of a given quest but keeping the quest pinned in either left side of right side of the screen! And maybe adding way point systems for directions or a small mini map shows where to go to explore! Because this game is massive and at first I only thought that this is the entire map for the game until by the end of the video I accidentally discovered that I was supposed to travel to another different map completely.
  • The battle system is cool, however I see it is so difficult to win battles in this part of the game shown on gameplay video. The battles are repeated as well, they tend to occur a lot once closer to an enemy and the escape button did not work for me! I might be wrong holding the wrong button though! One thing for sure, the battles are so hard to win them at the start and it does not show which slimes are easy to fight and which are harder.

Overall, I am interested in the game a lot, especially after discovering that there is more maps and places to go, I might do more video in the future for your game! Depending on how much this can be useful to you and on my schedule since there is lots of games waiting to be covered as well.

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ZakariaGhorfati, I am amazingly grateful for your video, and beyond sorry for how frustrating it was when faced with the difficulties. I didn't realise how hard I had made it to battle some of the enemies there. You're not the only one to have the issues you outlined over the last week or so. 

I honestly had no idea how bad it was until your video. I'm really mad at myself, and I can say that I have overhauled the introduction for Chapter 3. A new character will be helping from the very start. I've added a much better tutorial battle, and much more helpful content. 

I'm so sorry, and making up for it with Chapter 3 as much as I can. It's been a very long project, and I guess I got so used to how to battle and do things, I didn't know I would cause such an upsetting experience. I will sort this out, I promise. 

I have replayed to your comment on the YouTube video and I came her as well to say that I already recorded some gameplay review for your latest update! I will make sure to post it tomorrow or as soon as possible! 

I do hope that this gameplay video review is giving enough feedback that you need in order to update your game.

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Thank you so much, but the update isn't out yet, it'll be around 2-3 days before I'll have it online. I'll message you once it is out. 

I meant that for one of the previeous updates (I can't remember which one but I will let you know soon) and I have been following and reading your dev logs!! I can honestly say that you really made a huge change for the entire game! I am really impressed and surprised to how much you are dedicated to this game! I truly wish for you all the best and will take a look on your game from time to time.

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Hello, I notice that you are an active Youtuber. If you want to test high-quality indie games, you can try all those winners in the Syntaxbomb contests. For example, these are the three winners in the 11th contest:
https://www.syntaxbomb.com/index.php/topic,8165.0.html

Thank you! I might be including those as well, I do have a lot of games to cover and I am going to add those three winners to the list as well!

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New version is out. Man, I am so baked from all the work, but this really has been worth it. Thanks again Zakaria.