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This game is beautiful.  It has basically nothing to do with the xkcd comic it was based on aside from "Bobby Tables" (unless there's something at the end I missed), but the platforming and table-using mechanic is still great.

The "tutorial" is well designed--first you show movement, then jumping, then checkpoints, then throwing tables.  One step at a time.  Nice job. :) And throwing tables is really fun (even if they do go quite far, which doesn't pair well with the camera later).

But the level after the second checkpoint (where you have to hop on the two brown cubes) is a few steps above what you've introduced to us.  You show us our table mechanic right before that level by having us put down a table and hop on it to get to a higher ledge.  That's fine, but right after that, not only do you introduce enemies, you introduce an area where it's pretty much necessary to put down a table just right (and possibly drag it [trying not to die in the process] because the area's a tight spot), and do jumps exactly correctly on tiny cubes!  Next time, please increase the difficulty one step at a time, not three steps at once.

The cat killing is pretty brutal.  And it isn't made clear that the cat is an enemy, since it's just as colorful as everything else and looks fine from a distance--I went right up to it because I thought maybe it would help me, and I got killed.

The camera is way too close.  It's hard to see things at times, and I really wanted to zoom back so I can assess the whole problem in front of me.  Especially for later levels where you get more tables and have to stack them to reach the ledge--since I can't see the top of the ledge at all, it's very hard to tell if I'm doing it right until it's already too late, and I either got lucky and reach the top or I have to do everything all over again.

Speaking of which, reaching the ledge with 3 tables was near impossible!  I tried to complete it for quite a long time before I gave up.  I'm sure there's a clever solution, but nothing you've introduced in the game made that solution clear, and I freestyled tables for a while before I couldn't do it.

The ability to grab and drag tables would greatly help this game.  And I assume (since this is something I relied on quite a few times throughout this game) that you wanted the player to turn tables on the side and hop on them--if that is the case, you need to introduce that in the game itself.

This is a bright game; it's quite astonishing that everything in it was made by you in a weekend.  Bobby Tables leaves much to be desired, but I still had fun with it.

(P.S: Why is it Episode 2?)

Thanks for playing and your essay of a feedback!

It's kinda funny how on each single jam, people like to point out how my game has nothing to do with the theme. Whatever the theme is and whatever I do. I thought for sure this time would be different but hey, here we are again. You're saying that it's only "Bobby Tables" part that is from the comic but but isn't that pretty much the whole comic? Rather than the end, there is a "hidden" bit in the beginning that ties the story together a bit better, introducing Bobby's mom and the school. Bobby also likes to drop tables...

I think you were doing the double brown square part wrong and making it harder for yourself than needed. You don't need any tables in that part unless you fall down. So I don't quite see it as three steps of difficulty, just like one and a half. A few trickier jumps and the introduction of the cats. Sure, quite a lot of people will not see the cat as the enemy at first but the checkpoint is just half a screen away (and dying is even faster way to get back up again to jump on the brown squares). And in the same vein, pretty much all the cats are positioned so that they will cheaply kill you if you aren't being careful, but the previous checkpoint is always just a second away.

Agreed on the camera. As I've said on the other comments already, there are spots on the level that change the zoom level but not enough. And it seems like you didn't notice you can actually pan the camera up/down, that helps a bit with the camera. And that mechanic serves as a subtle hint that you can actually do directional throws with the tables (or maybe not an actual hint but will make players do it by accident). I guess you didn't figure that out either. Sure, thinking about it now, the directional throws should have been introduced somehow earlier on.

Oh yeah I did have the intention at add grab/drag at first but it was left at the cutting room floor because of lack of time and not seeing it as an necessity.

The episode two bit was me just trying to be silly...