Hmm... This is something else for sure. A good story there, actualy very interesting and deep! I want more :)
The only thing is... I cant call it a game at all. Just reminds me about good old visual novels, more like a book... but a little space for new flows could be great too. After finishing story there is nothing to do. Developer, it would be cool if you could consider to add free exploration mode to the game with some repeat activities and keep the actual story as main events. I definetely want to "walk" around the island on myself. Ofcourse it can be too much of work after all and too many things to change... But it could be great to turn this story to an actual game.
Anyway, I like it lot, thank you very much for creating this magical piece of art! :)