I remember that scene since I played through the game again to see if anything changed (been playing since 0.5 or 6), and going for the "bad karma" choice probably ensures Minerva's full possession, I'd guess.
And man, I kind of noticed this thing of writing too fast, especially the scenes. Suddenly one of girls feels like boning, and of course we could blame everything about that on Lou but... yeah.
It's something I have to accept, even I feels like shit's going too fast and goddamit in 0.9 is probably the fastest with the kind of stuff it brings on the table god damn, fortunatly once that last major event passed, the setting of the story will allow me to take a deep breath and relax for a few updates with a slower pace.
In my personal opinion, and I won't act like an award-winning script writer or game developer, all you need to do is do a little bit of a remake of the first part of the game from the first part 'till the "edgy demon MC" scene. The problem is that I do know how nightmarish it will be so... I don't know. Just rest a bit and plan your work, Stronk. You can make it, we all know it.
