Wow!! I really want to say I love how innovative the mechanics are here! You expanded past the idea of a typical visual novel by adding a type of platformer element to it! I have never seen a game do that before, and I'm not sure what the process was like coming up with that idea, but it is pure brilliance! ^ ㅡ^ The color palette work so well together, and the sound effects are spot on! :3 Art is too cute for words, and kudos to you for drawing out your entire logo! Must have taken quite a bit of time.
Honestly, given the time constraints, I think your game was really well made and well polished! Things I would have loved to see is maybe a sneak peek of some dialogue above each choice you connect to. :D But the mystery of not knowing is what makes it fun, so not sure if that suggestion is warranted.. HAHA!
Overall, had a blast playing! ^ㅡ ^