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Hi everybody. First of all: nice. I love those Dark-soulish games. And I like BitD mechanics, so... nice combo.
Then, a potential bug: pag. 45, Flashback chapter talk about "stress", while I suppose here should be Doom.

Andrea "Lord Lance" P.3 years ago

Also, pag. 46, you used the Dark, with the capital D, while the Chapter title has a humble dark.

Andrea "Lord Lance" P.3 years ago

Pag. 50, under End of the Line there's a reference about Darkness Ability. But the only similar thing I find along the book are the Dark Gifts.

Andrea "Lord Lance" P.3 years ago

In this part, you could put a couple of black signs on the Might bar, so the image is 100% coherent with the example you are giving on the left.

Alice Loverdrive3 years ago (1 edit) (+2)

The bar is for tracking XP, though I completely forgot to talk about advancement in any length lol

Noted! I'll publish an updated version somewhere this weekend, there's a couple of other things I've noticed.

Andrea "Lord Lance" P.3 years ago

Of course, there are typos around, but I suppose the beta version is still in full developement. However, at least fix incadecense at pag. 64, opportuunity at pag.51, sloppines at pag.57, beaty at pag. 76.

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