This is an interesting short visual novel!
I really like the artwork! The character art in particular was cute and expressive. Especially the fullscreens, such as the hug and when he brought over the rabbit.
The gameplay is mostly a standard visual novel. I do appreciate that there is a battle of sorts, though it's pretty simple in it's current form. I'd like to see that spiced up a bit as you continue development!
The story was interesting, especially the twist at the end. The dialogue was fun and engaging. I will admit though, that I did have a bit of trouble following exactly what was happening big-picture wise. The scenes individually worked well, but it felt like it jumped quickly at moments.
I would like some audio, music, etc. There are a lot of great tracks online for free, usually (but not always!) with a simple credit requirement for usage.
Hoping that you are continuing development on this, as it has a lot of promise! As it currently stands, it's already pretty good... I'd love to see it go to the next level!