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Hey congratulations for the win it is deserved! Here is my feedback.

Pretty original graphics for a jam, they are clean and quite polished too. I had some little glitch I think, weird white particles appearing and disappearing on those platforms, and those rectangles I can’t see on your gif (using the web version)

I’m not sure the mechanics really fit the theme apart from the battery missing from the machines.

The level design is pretty good, the appearing texts is a nice touch.

Nice use of physics with the blocks and machines. The controls are well-implemented (coyote time etc) though there’s no fancy abilities like a dash, double jump, … I mean it’s ok since the focus is more on the puzzle.

Did you make the music also? It fits the theme quite well and it’s a bit spooky too. The lack of sounds isn’t too disturbing (it could be annoying when you’re trying to think)

Also no reward for finding all secrets ̶s̶o̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶g̶e̶t̶ ̶0̶/̶1̶0̶ It was a nice idea to make the player do a second playthrough because I had found none during the first!

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Oh by the way during the voting period of every GWJ I do one or two playtesting streams so next time you participate feel free to send me your game if you want it to be included for feedback!

Here’s the broadcast of the last one https://www.twitch.tv/videos/958970842

Will do, thanks for the info and the great feedback 🙂