Thanks for playing, and thanks for the great feedback!
In the full version of the game we're looking to spread the notes over an extended version of this level, around 2 or 3 times as long, we were just very excited to tell the story in the demo :)
No worries. Looking forward to trying future builds. Really loved the first one so I'm excited to see where it goes.
With regards to the notes. As well as spreading them out, I'd also recommend condensing them significantly. If you could get it down to one page per note then the game will flow a lot better. Keep up the great work! :)