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I don't see any major problems with it.  The main thing that might be a little clumsy is this:

The game's idle speed is adjustable. Most players can finish within several minutes, and there is also a speedrun leaderboard.

This doesn't really flow as a paragraph, and I don't think it needs to be in the blurb at the top, either.  It might be better as a list of features, like this:

  • Adjustable idle speed
  • Fast-paced rounds - only a few minutes
  • Leaderboard for speedrunners

Just a thought.  The only other thing that bothers me a little is using the word "army" twice in the second sentence.  Maybe change it to "Recruit and upgrade your troops"?

thanks