Update for the week of September 24, 2017
I've finally got the script critiqued and revised, and I also acquired the necessary photo backgrounds I will use. As for the music, I have approached two musicians, Alec Shea of Sonancy Designs and TyberAlyx, to have some of their music used for the game. And they did give me some select pieces.
For those who are curious about what the two main characters, Jacqueline and Rayzelle Anne, will look like, here's some concept art done by elliskim (timefiddler on Discord).
And here it is. The very first rough build of the game, which covers the first of the story's two acts. Note that the transitions are rough, and there are no sprites or event CGs yet (though I have a prospective artist on board now).
https://www.dropbox.com/s/gqdq0itckrrvcol/SundayAtTheMemories-build0.1-all.zip?dl=0