I did a write-up on this! Short version: I really enjoyed it, but audio is an absolute must for the future!
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Somehow I *just* noticed this post--thanks so much for the write-up!
Completely agree with your points. Part of the reason I established early on that Santa is a real guy in this universe is so people would realize the whole thing was silly, and wouldn't make a serious effort to solve the "mystery".
I do hope to add in music/sound at some point, and am working on a sequel as well!