main-screen: credits.
" being an excess-icon there. While switching back, the blue clickable lines transformed into a different font and appearing in red (which fit way more to itch's theme and the game's banner/title).
I like that this game's available on the web and actually noticed it by a forum's post-reply, getting to your profile and trying something in "hybrid"-game.
Affecting magic sounds cool in textlines. I like the option of alternate lines, especially: "You're wearing your hair as you usually do, shaved" ...uhm, I guess the text should quite replace bit more of the prev. part if this section appears by clicking?
Choosing no first/last nick, gets still the next part loaded, which just looks bit odd in reading. Maybe there could be a command in html, which greys out the continue-info, if either no input or less than x-amount of letters being entered?
"At your full height, you find" (selectable options, which also starts with "you"), sounds like some text should replace bit of the lines that stated before those?
"Altogether it's disappointingly neat"-paragraph's reply would be cool to sound more comfy in words (less "rude").
"She reaches into her bag" / reply: "plastic sleeve pages"
Just one "-icon being mentioned there, which quite needs another one (sorry if I'm being bit perfectionistic when browsing through games). So there are 3 than 4 of those icons in this section yet.