Posting here because I do not have any other way to contact you.
I believe I'm on the optimal path right now, all thus far have interest and concern in their own way. Only issues/suggestions I have a this time is that; I'm not sure the music for Onganku's Theme is the most fitting, it is energetic and focused sounding, but seems better for more an action/sports event, or at least doesn't seem to fit with his personality, interesting enough it probably fits some of the characters in certain ways but not others, like a cycle of reasons, it fits one for same reason it doesn't fit another. In the end the choice is yours and perhaps it will appear more fitting later on in story. Next is wanting some way to see what he MC/Melmond looks like in full like the others, this may also include Prof Soren should it be a good idea. Last is to add more expressions and/or increase the expressiveness of the current expressions, there seems to be too subtle a difference right now.
Perhaps you have already noted these, but if you haven't I wanted to provide my thoughts. I can already forsee things getting Very Intresting.