Hi there! I'm here again ♥
It's an honor to be the first replying here tbhh! I'm getting excited over nothing haha
As I've already answered most of those questions about how I like the game and all, I'll just leave a review on the 1.3 version.
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Firstly, if I have to be honest I was a bit panicking with the remove of the godmod. As I'm very busy those days, I was scared that I wouldn't be able to make enough IG money to read all the chapters as fast as possible haha. Surprisingly, reading Neil's chapters from the 21th didn't cost anything. Maybe a bug? I didn't mind to be honest. Then, reading Dimitri's, it did cost 750 for each. As we start with 5000 coins, I didn't need to worry though especially when I already read the first three chapters.
Still, I wanted to try the selling option after reading all the new chapters (which got me totally disappointed during Neil's last chapter by the way. COME ON! why did he stop? I was craving for this loooll. You're so mean Celianna! You tease us just as much as we tease your characters!) anywaaay, so I was saying! I tested this selling option out, and it was kinda fun to be honest. I don't know if it'll be more challenging later on though. It's fun because it somehow has a satisfying sense, but I didn't need to do it a lot. Maybe if I had 20 chapters to catch on, I'd be a bit bored to do so many (easy) clothes. We need to sell 5 pieces for a chapter. It's like 100 clothes if I want to catch up 20 chapters. I won't deny it can become pretty boring. The reason why it's satisfying at first is because it's new and still relaxing. After 100 pieces, it's not new anymore. I don't know if you planned to make the level harder or not (maybe there's more clothes to make once we buy more fabrics? I can't say because I didn't buy any). However I think the cost for a chapter is reasonable tho', doing a mere five pieces of clothes that isn't hard to do is totally fine. It's not too easy either. But maybe add other games related to fashion? Like picking a premade outfit for the clients? The player would have to guess according to the looks of the person and some small info about him. For example, if he likes pink or wears a lot of pink, maybe advice him a pink outfit? For 150 coins as well, but if you do a bad pick you'd gain less. Like 75 for a bad one and 30 for the worst one? Or something. Those are just ideas, but to sum up I don't see myself playing more than 20 chapters doing the same easy game for too many times. Or even if it's not an easy one, I still don't see myself doing it over and over again.
2.
Hmm, that's it for the selling game. Now concerning something totally different I noticed or precisely didn't notice? I don't know if I just didn't see the right button or if there really is a small problem. First, while making a new game, we can't skip the intro? I wasn't able to do so at least. Also, we're asked if we want to continue off from the last beta. However, if we agree and then finish all the available chapters, we're asked if we want to do the other character's route as well. But if we agree again, it'll start the story from the 1st chapter? To be honest, after finishing Neil's, I got too lazy to start Dimitri since first chapter so I just closed the game and made a new game again, but this time picked Dimitri to continue after chapter 3. Thus, I haven't saved any game file to be honest. Then, I'm wondering if for the next release we'll have to download the game again? Or will we be able to simply update it and keep our files (for clothes specifically)? If it'll be saved, then I guess I'll have to try to save money to buy items. If it won't be saved, then I'll wait for the next release and never buy any clothes until the complete game lolol
Oh and talking about clothes... It's too bad that there's no preview in the shop? Or I didn't catch the preview button then. As the prices are pretty high to be honest, I don't see myself wasting all my money on an item I don't really like in the end. If you buy a clothe item you don't really like, at least you can try to customize it to make it better looking. However, if you buy a hair you don't like... It's like 5K wasted? I think the new long hair released (with the bangs) costs 5000 if I remember well? Which is very expensive especially if I don't like it. If I do my math correctly, it's like selling 34 clothes;;;
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Then finally about the story itself! As said previously, you're being reaaally unfair with Neil! When MC invited him over and he agreed I was like "OMG IS IT GONNA HAPPEN THIS TIME??" and then, well, no. If it were me, I wouldn't have let him go at all lol! Aaah so frustrating! But I really liked it tho! His moaning also caught me off guard this time again. I mean, I never really expect to hear him moan for real haha. But it sets the mood real good! I also enjoyed looking at the new bakcgrounds haha.
On the other hand, Dimitri's was very cute and much more innocent. I had a smile on my face! Tho' I'm wondering when will you be unleashing the beast? /shots
Another disappoitment on this chapter as well tho! I have to wait for the next release to know what his idea is! I'm expecting him to prostitute himself act like some kind of hot guy making advertisement in front of the shop? LOL. But then again maybe I read too many shoujos with bishounen using their beauty to sell off stuff haha
AND SOOO I WAS ABLE TO UNDERSTAND THAT ABS-THING!! To be real honest, I was thinking of some real weird situation. Like, Dimitri becoming crazy and showing his abs? MC becoming some kind of pervert as well. lololol
You made me think of crazy stuff, I still liked it! Tho, if it were me, I would have looked away haha. Just like a 2nd Dimitri bruh
Anyway this feedback came out longer than expected lol! But in my defense, my Wordpress still is a shoujo-review blog. So it can't be helped riiight! Sigh. Another months to wait for the next release! So sad! I almost want to hack into your computer to view your script files and read the WIP stories /shots