I played your game on a windows computer and here's my feed back.
- Controls
Because of the locked camera view the controls should be reversed as of s = Forward (all from characters perspective) a = Right and D = Left. Also because your just running forward there should be no need to go backwards.
Jumping in the game is delayed from when I first press space, I don't know if that is in the game or just because my computer is crappy but the jump should be one to one.
Because the jumping was delayed I couldn't get past the first jump and can't make much more feed back one last thing I noticed was a stiff running animation for the girl, this could be because of time constrains or other reason but either way its up to you to make the best choice.