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Just finished this and loving it.  Characters are diverse and I always get the feeling each and everyone of them has a history to explore.  I like how this is a fiction where the character is trying to build up their self-esteem.  They didn't start out confident, but are working on it.

I am a little worried of not seeing any true obstacle.  Normally a good story involves a challenge of some sort, a present danger which the protagonist has to resolve.  I'm probably just being impatient considering this VN is just starting.  Can't wait to see more.

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Hi! You touch on a lot of things I think about when writing, the next chapter does introduce a main part of the story. Hopefully it'll live up to your hopes and expectations.