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I really love the art work here.  I would recommend though trying to recruit a beta reader or two to read the writing and give feedback.  There's forums out there to ask for one and they can help with some of the grammar problems.

I'd like to see a reboot, maybe more emphasis on a 'slice of life' story

I laughed outloud when I saw the beard.  Great way to catch me by surprise.

I'm also looking forward to this

I like this game and was looking into being a patreon, but I gotta say $12 a month for the latest update is steep compared to other developers on patreon.  I'm patreon of other visual novel games and before this, the highest charge I saw for getting  a updated game on patreon was $10.  You may want to consider redoing your tiers.

Loving this VN so far.  I really like how events are happening, but the reader doesn't have a sure sense of what's going on.  A mystery playing out in the background.

Really hope to see a English version of this, love the artwork.

In terms of what I'm hoping to see more of in the future.  I'm hoping there will be more story-lines of one on one interactions with the characters the protagonist shows the most interest in.  I know that can lead to more writing because you need to basically write for each branch, but I think you'll get more people interested in the game when they get the option to more closely talk to the character they like the most. 

This was a great novel?  Will you be starting up a patreon page for it?

Even with the english translation being rough around the edges, the plot of this story is pretty good.  Humans being a lower class to beast people.  If you ever setup a Patreon page, I'd seriously consider contributing if the contributions were for better english translations of the story.

This is very good.  I like the way events turned out when it came to the two choices you're given.  Also great artwork.

This has been a great novel to read.  Balances saving the world with romancing a husky man just right.  Going to be interesting to see how the husky reacts the next day.

Keep in mind there's no patreon where they have subscribers paying to see more.  They have a Kofi account to just get random donations.  So no monthly pay to motivate getting work produced.

I've noticed with some VN projects, the more people you have on board for it, the slower it can be.  I've seen a party of 2 get monthly updates out and a party of seven take six months.

Had a couple of hiccups.  First I couldn't install it via itchio app, had to download it via the web.  Also tried to send a $1 paypal payment and got a error message.  May want to have someone test out that stuff for you.

So gave this a try and gotta say it's well made.  Interesting story and good design.  Good job!

I plan to play this as soon as the english version comes out in Jan, looks really good

Just finished playing this and decided to become a patreon.  Very well written and I can't way to seethe outcomes of the 'influence' we can do. 

Just played this and there's a lot of mysteries around this story.  Like what the weird dream is about?  And why is the protagonist is referred to as a 'big guy', but appears surprised at being called a 'big guy'?  You did a good job of creating scenarios which are going to needle the reader's curiosity. 

This is a good start of a demo, had both horror and light hearted jokes.

Just played this and like it.  You might want to consider setting up a patreon page.

Wow this is already very impressive.  If you post a patreon page then let us know.  I'm sure you could get some people to contribute and help.

I love this game, it's great writing and you really get a feel for each character.  Find the protagonist attractive too.  But hate how the two guys I find hottest are married and unavailable.  Maybe down the line they'll be interested in polymer, crossing my fingers.

This is a cool VN so far and looking forward to more.  Notice the sprites only have one set of clothes so far even when scenes describe them wearing something different which is understandable.  Not sure of what you use for drawing, but adobe illustrator lets you basically draw 'layers' onto the sprite.  So for instance you can draw them naked, then another layer of normal clothes.  This lets you just switch between what sprites wear with a click.  Just a tip which might help.  Do some drawing myself.

Just found this gem and gotta say the writing is excellent.  Will you possibly be doing a patreon page?

I so love how much sass everyone gives each other.  Even how his family talks to each other is hilarious.

This is a very impressive VN.  The music itself sets the mood perfectly.  And I can already tell the story is going to be awesome.

I can tell you put a lot of effort into this.  Also liked the music at the end.  Good work!

Love this story, especially what a goof his best friend gator is.

Just finished playing this demo, very interesting.  Wish the rabbit came along for the ride, thought he was hunky.

I love the artwork and the distinct personalities of the characters.  Can also tell there's hints of a plot twist in the future.  I would make one suggestion- have the writing concentrate less on technicalities of what the protagonist is going through at the hotel and more on personal discussions with the other characters.  With the writing detailing bracelets opening locker and buffet etiquette, I felt like there was a missed chance on asking Arty about himself.  Although maybe I'm just getting impatient on knowing the character.  Other readers might disagree.  

Here are some suggestions just because I've been patreon to some- gallery with vn, polls on what character to work on first, sneak peeks at CGs which will be included in the game.  This is personal opinion, but you'll want to avoid offering rewards which are time consuming- knew someone offering to type up side-stories as a benefit but it was a turn off because that meant they were working on something other than the VN project.

Just played the updated version and love it.  Will be paying attention to patreon page as well in case you add more stuff there.

Just played this and find it fun.  Will there be a patreon page?

Love the artwork of this game, are you going to have a patreon page?

This is a very good game so far.  Any plans to do a patreon page

This is strictly my two cents, perhaps others disagree.  I notice on your patreon page you are offering side writing projects for increased tiers.  This could actually turn people off and have them not be patreons.  Because now they're thinking about how time will be spent away from the project they want to see progressed.  I've seen with VN porjects, picture galleries and decision polls offered for higher tier.  May want to consider using those as rewards instead. 

I'm really liking this.  *spoiler* I actually chose to talk to Cedric instead of fighting him.  Normally I always choose the 'get most likes' choice.  But I just felt the protagonist deserved a chance to speak to him.  That's when I know when I'm reading  a good story, I care more about what the protagonist goes through versus the so called rack up the most like points choice.  You may want to get a patreon page if you think you can commit to this project.

So far this game looks very well made.  Interested in seeing more