The game looks promissing, however it's clear that English isn't your first language. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, and sentences that don't make much sense in the context they are spoken.
I urgently suggest you to find a beta-reader that has native level, your writing and the game would definitely benefit from it. Keep up the good work!
I do happen to be a native English speaker. If you think the grammar and sentences are that bad I will find some other opinions on the dialogue to help correct it.
I'm not much of a writer, admittedly. I have mostly focused on programming and art in my life. If there's any part of the game that you think stands out as particularly bad I'd be happy to review it.
