Your Phone Dies in 20 Seconds

YES I WON WITH BRIANNA

oh no a white tiktok girls biggest fear /j

3 minutes to win, good game

The game itself is really well made, personally I don't like the story but that's a personal thing so I can't judge it for that. However, you don't really get to read the text as your goal is to rush.

for a first game it is good

Good game. Although more horror element could be added :)

I loved it, so cool, keep doing quality content

This concept is really interesting and it was fun to play, but when using the phone it's almost impossible to read the dialogue in time without the timer running down. I know the whole thing is supposed to be in real time to add to urgency, but not being able to read the exposition and narration in time makes it frustrating. The writing is interesting, though, and the time mechanic is a very cool idea!

At first i was calm but then i panicked and just started pressing every thing lmao

I couldn't call the cops fast enough, so I simply turned around and stabbed him 243 times in the neck with a pencil. Same difference.

Luke is an A-hole

did that well and good

This was a really interesting experience. It really brings to light the struggle of walking alone at night

nice game, first ending i got was because i tried calling my mum and she did NOTHINGGG and i had no time to call the police so i was kidnapped

i got the ending where the man is arrested and boy, was that one heck of a ride. i was actually anxious!

after the ending where you say you will not rely on others for safety there should be a third option to turn around

I found this game because of Sjoerd Hekking’s review and boy, I did not expect it to be that stressful! I am not quite sure whether maybe a bit more time would have made it easier to actually read the conversations with our phone contacts, I had to chaotically click randomly a few times, but I really enjoyed the concept as well as the different endings (also the main message of this game: don’t work overtime :D). 

The game could use some polishing, both text-wise and maybe styling/mechanics-wise or I would love to see a “remastered/remake” of this fun time killer. It’s definitely worth a few plays, it’s minimalistic, so don’t expect it to be enormous or perfect.

Full review on my website!

done

cool itch's theme, game's title and banner, same as its font (which caught my attention).

"run"-button/main-screen:
white-bluish text on black background (and text-size & type), I like it so far.

menu with hovering/clickable sections changing in colours (also: highlighted words) sounds cool in gameplay.

would you generally plan to offer this game in other languages or just in english, depending on the option if user's would be open for collaborating or trusting them if their translations could be correct, etc.?

in-game, first screen: how about task/replies having +1 additional space/paragraph (than the ones between the lines, so the choseable texts would be quite more noticeable, next to its different font-colour&type there)?

typo?
turn on phone. dail911 ("task" refers to daill 999 being its standard), so somehow an "L" being bit excess, I guess?

I like the visual countdown and edited text after it reaches zero. The storyline's also cool when using the other option than turning on your phone's battery with 20sec left.

I double won yay 😁 

speed.

 I am   s p e e d .

Um......that was easy? I did it in 10 seconds

This comment contains spoilers for the endings so please read at your own risk!

The whole time I was picking the options to save the woman, I was hurriedly clicking here and there while skimming through the text. I loved that there were multiple endings to this. So far, I got multiple endings such as 'Brianna saves you' ending, and the 'Woman Reported Missing' ending. That ending where she went missing gave me the shivers, because those cases can happen in real life too. 

There was an ending where the woman became suspicious of Luke's whereabouts when her life was in danger so I played it a few more times to see where Luke actually was and apparently this is the ending I got: 

Well, turns out Luke is a cheating bastard. But overall, it's a good game with rising tension as the seconds count down. 

sure

cool game, I love the idea, I got 2 endings, There should be more games like his

Really cool game!

There should be an option to beat the shit out of your stalker; 0/10

Short but effective. I felt tense the whole time, even through multiple play throughs.

This game does a good job of being scary due to the reality of this kind of situation occurring. I like it for the most part, but do have some complaints. I like the aspect of a timer, but the dialogue is far too long for me to read in those 20 or less seconds. I understand you'd have to skip some, and try to only take in the important things, but I wish there were a bit less text at times. I also wanted to give you feedback on my game not having audio. I am not sure if that's due to playing the web version or if it's just a glitch. I do also like that you added 5 seconds from the original 15 since the first time I played this. I think this game has potential. I look forward to what you make in the future. :)

pretty cool, got scared but neat

Ayo FUCK Luke bruh

Good game btw, choose your own adventures are always the scariest imo

the REAL question, is luke cheating on you? wait nvm i got the "found him out" ending