I'm excited to get to look forward to another game by your team.A Hand in the Darkness was good, so I'm hoping to see more of that. I love the steam punk aesthetic, and once I finish the whole demo I'll write in the Gaming in Pajamas blog about it.
For now, I did notice some grammar errors. I've been keeping track, but the list has become a bit long. So I thought, if you like, you can send me the script for the demo and I can just fix it up for you. If not, that's okay too. Just thought I'd offer :)