Very interesting Story choice would love to see a game from you with more polishing.
It's a step up from What is that, but it feels rushed. The first encounter with the lady was in a well-lit room that made the encounter a bit strange not so much scary. The event triggers could be a lot earlier in most cases. Don't give the player time to examine the whole situation before he wanders in the trigger, that can make a scary situation strange, the same for the event's they don't need to examine every bit before it vanishes. The gaps and overlaps in the level weren't really pretty and the tiling of some textures was off, that's the reason I said the game feels rushed. (A bit harsh but you asked for honest opinons)
But that's just my two cents! Big props to you for finishing and submitting the games, Really Love them! I tried to enter a few jams as well but I want to make things too perfect and never got one finished in time.
I had so many Problems with that Vid >_< sorry if it's not the best quality GamePlay.