Hi, I'm liking the story so far. :) I noticed you wrote about Alen & Jymsar sprites needing more attention. I don't know if you're already done with that / how much you're changing them, but I figured I could make a suggestion of some minor edits for Jymsar:
Basically, in the current art his shoulders are a bit asymmetrical, and the nose&eyes are rotated different ways, making his head feel slightly warped. And finally, the left cheek is more pointed and forward than his right cheek.
Sorry for the unsolicited comment - the art is great already, better than what I can draw. :) Feel free to disregard my comment if you disagree, it's just my subjective opinion.