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Hi, I'm liking the story so far. :) I noticed you wrote about Alen & Jymsar sprites needing more attention. I don't know if you're already done with that / how much you're changing them, but I figured I could make a  suggestion of some minor edits for Jymsar:

https://imgur.com/a/bFpOuHi

Basically, in the current art his shoulders are a bit asymmetrical, and the nose&eyes are rotated different ways, making his head feel slightly warped. And finally, the left cheek is more pointed and forward than his right cheek.

Sorry for the unsolicited comment - the art is great already, better than what I can draw. :) Feel free to disregard my comment if you disagree, it's just my subjective opinion.

I actually agree on the shoulders...but the face change makes him look a little TOO humanoid

Hmm you're right, my face change does make it more human-ish, probably a bit too much.  I still think there's something slightly odd going on with the face, as if he's tilting his head a little, but his snout isnt tilted with his head.

Maybe something like this? I tried keeping puma-like proportions while still trying to make all his head-parts have the same rotation.

https://imgur.com/a/XTpH32K

https://imgur.com/a/86opLJq

The symmetrical anchor marked in pink (his upper shoulders) is by far the most obvious outlier, and the only one I'd suggest is an 'error', the rest could very well be stylistic choice.

Another thing I just noticed is that his hair tuft goes over what we see as his left eye, making me see it as an eyebrow. It makes the face look a little more asymmetrical than it is...

Worth noticing that Im only reacting to this facial asymmetry on this 'sorta sad' expression - the smiling/laughing face looks great. Im just nitpicking this specific one because it's used a lot.

Yeah I saw what you were talking about...the change looks good :)

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Noted, thank you