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Promissing plot, not a fan of the artwork, though...

Thanks for the comment! If I may ask, what is it about the artwork that makes it unfavorable. I’m looking to improve anywhere I can.

PaleAngel_903 years ago (1 edit) (+1)

They look too thin, like they are unhealthily thin. For example: Yukine, for being studying a major in Athletics he's almost bulimic thin. Which makes no sense, someone studying to major in Athletics should have at the very least some muscle, since it makes sense that he'd want to dedicate himself to a career centered around sports...

Yukine3 years ago(+2)

Ah that was an issue I had noted when I initially made the sprites due to my canvas size. It’s something I do plan to go back and fix.

PaleAngel_903 years ago(+1)

Good to know, though I expanded the reply. Check it out whenever you can. To give you a more detailed explanation.

Yukine3 years ago(+2)

That was my thought as well. The fact he wears looser clothing does not help either. I will be trying to define his muscles more when I go back and redraw the sprites to see if it will help.

PaleAngel_903 years ago (1 edit) (+1)

The others would benefit from the same readjustment too, don't you think?

Yukine3 years ago(+2)

So after doing some concept sketches and redrawing Yukine's sprite. I absolutely see what you mean. Both myself and my team have agreed we will overhaul all the sprites. It will take some time so we won't have them ready until maybe day 4, but we will definitely be doing it.

PaleAngel_903 years ago(+1)

That's good to know! Can't wait to see what you and your team come up with! :)

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