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Visual novel? Great stuff! Will see if I can finish it fully later when I have time, but from what I've seen (I think I've only played for 5min XP):

-Your art has definitely gotten much, much better since the first time I saw your works. The arts here are simply amazing.

-The writing too. This is very well written (so far)

-I love the tennis minigame. Visual novel games really need minigames like this to break off from just reading and reading and choosing and choosing.

I think my only complain is when I accidentally clicked too fast in the first choice dialogue... A little polish here is to slightly delay the appearance of choice dialogues before appearing.

Personally I'm not a fan of Yuri but hey, this is quality stuff.

Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the art and writing... both areas that I'm working on.

I 100% agree on the minigames! I love it when visual novels break it up a bit. There's another major minigame toward the end of the story. (Not the second tennis game, something after that) If I make another VN in the future, definitely expect more minigames.

Good feedback on the buttons, I'll see what I can do there. I may do a small polish update at some point... I'm cleaning up a couple of the background images that got rushed more than others.  Thinking about trying to make a quick holiday game first though, we'll see haha. I'm low on time, so it'll probably be way less polished than my last few.

Let me know if you finish it! The whole thing is probably only 10-15 mins long, as I did this in a bit of a rush. (Didn't start until 2 weeks before the deadline...)

Thanks as always for checking it out!