Visual novel? Great stuff! Will see if I can finish it fully later when I have time, but from what I've seen (I think I've only played for 5min XP):
-Your art has definitely gotten much, much better since the first time I saw your works. The arts here are simply amazing.
-The writing too. This is very well written (so far)
-I love the tennis minigame. Visual novel games really need minigames like this to break off from just reading and reading and choosing and choosing.
I think my only complain is when I accidentally clicked too fast in the first choice dialogue... A little polish here is to slightly delay the appearance of choice dialogues before appearing.
Personally I'm not a fan of Yuri but hey, this is quality stuff.