This was adorable! Also really well crafted. Great artwork, excellent voicing, good sound design. Interactive elements are always a plus in VNs too, so enjoyed those... though a tiny nitpick there. On the flour mixing, if I grabbed the "wrong" bowl, I could still dump it in, but the "correct" bowl would disappear instead. This is a silly nitpick, but everything else was so perfect that it stood out to me.
Heck, even the surprise ad break/promo slid right in and felt totally natural!
Awesome work, really enjoyed this VN!