Hi I really like the story but somehow I can't hear music in the browser version(I can hear the ring at the beginning and I have say it shocked me a lot lol, maybe turn it down a little?)
Another problem I have on the browser is the text is longer than my screen so I have to scale the front to see the full texts. maybe have a scroller in this case?
And the story is kind of short.. and ends all of a sudden. Looking forward to have a more complicated story with alternative ending!
Overall a good game!