- The interval between the two characters voices is the tritone. I would probably choose a less tense interval unless that is what you are going for.
- I was going to complain about the portraits being higher resolution than the 2D game mode but since you have the 3D switching oh well.
- I think I'd prefer a short input buffer on the movement controls.
- The notes don't say which direction to put the books in a second time and I forgot.
- Why isn't the painting a loss reference? You had one job.
- I like the characters and the simple 3D art style.
- The 2D is a bit hard to read but its functional for now so it could be improved later.