It was emotive, it got water running down my cheeks.
This is not really realistic at all ? All the fact around the story feels kinda flimsy excuses to meet dramatic ends, it kinda show. SF is about making a few new rules, but there, it's like, "basic IA/computing stuff is now out, they are human-like with more limitation now".
Computer can sleep-mode or shutdown or hibernate since the start of computing X_X
Also she is waaaaay too human ! A voice for singing ? ONE VOICE ? She is an ultra self-aware computer and she gets to have one only voice ?
There is so much to say about how she only "sees" through her 3D representation also, or interrupt her though of process, or talk/think at the pace of the human >_<
I basically had a lot of problem with that all the way ! "Let's pretend buuuut. That doesn't make sense dammit !"
To me there was lot of "IA stuff" to try out, like personality splitting (she could split her memory and speak all night with other self for instance), creativity... Having to stuggle with the fact her memory isn't infinite and she'd have to forget/optimize stuff too. Lot of IA's lost on the space problems x)