I’m happy for you, but this pitch is a bit long - even longer than your store description. (It’s meant to be a quick summary of the game.)
Hey! I have reduced the article and moved most of the info to a linked devlog. Better?
Better. :)
I hope your project does well.
(Btw: Its status on the store page is still listed as in development. I would have sent a DM, but that’s seemingly not an option on itch.)
damn Thanks! you are an angel. All fixed now!