Thanks for the honest feedback. I just added a screenshot of how our graphic design appears. We are a very new development team of 2, and therefore we are putting time and energy on creating the game because we go full blast on social networks.
But look at how much you were able to improve that post with less than 5 minutes of work. I’m not suggesting you switch your entire attention from development to PR. It’s just that you can make your work shine considerably more with just a little more care and attention.
After seeing that screenshot I’m more intrigued by your project - and others might feel the same way.
Edit: Formatting.