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Andrea, I profusely apologize to you for not commenting earlier [not that your life would depend on it, though)].
I read OLSK a year ago. As a seasoned VN reader I was confident, 'Nah, no onions. Nope, the story is predictable. No way in ren...py will it make me cry, there is no voicing even.'
And yet I was crying. I don't know how you did it, but I was crying.
And the ending is just great, though I expected the MC to leave.
The CG with the half-transparent marine silhouette is a great embodiment of the whole story.

PS I hadn't cried after losing some girls in Katawa Shoujo, I wasn't crying while playing some grim VNs, but Azzurra and Giovanni...

Thank you so much for your comment batrudi, and don't worry about not commenting before! I'm happy to know that this story was able to communicate something to you, it pays back all the effort I put into the story. I hope that I can give you other stories like this in the future!

I also hope so. If you ever need help editing texts in English and Russian, LMK.
I'm not a native speaker, but I teach English as a foreign language for a living and I help proofread/translate VNs for free.

I helped edit https://namelessnoun.itch.io/infamous8/  and the video scripts for https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCC2P80KxEtlkoTFscHsH3NA/videos

+ I translated Infamous8 and one lewd VN into Russian.

Thanks for the offer! Send me an email so that we can reman in contact, you can find my address on my website

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